How my project is going so far

Here are two screen shots of my initial film in the editing process. In the first screen shot it shows a shot from the first set of filming I did, from personal preference and audience feedback it has been decided that this shot will not be used in the finished product (thankfully it is just my initial filming and not the final shot). The reason for the audience and myself for not liking this shot is because in the lower half of the shot it shows the unfinished side of the bath along with the wall and bath products in the background. My original ideas of the shot were to be just a single focused shot of the hand coming up and out of the bath and curling around the rim on the bath.

The second screen shot is of another piece of initial filming which has been put into premier pro. I do like this piece of film as it has been edited so the colour scheme is now black and white, this use of filter increases the contrast of the black t-shirt against the white bath, from audience feedback it was said from a 17 year old female "I like the black and white contrast as it shows how depressed the lead actor is and allows the audience to be emphasise with his emotions and feelings". So from this feedback I think it makes the black and white filter a contender for my actual filming for the finished product. HOWEVER I do not like (and neither do my audience) the fact that the shower curtain is in the shot and looks really messy.